I need help reviewing this English 2 Essay What is the topic of your paper?
perseverance

Where are you in the writing process?
I think I'm on track but ready for feedback
- So we started out on a prewriting Graphic organizer which was putting together cites and explanations from articles that we read previously. We then moved on to online. This is the rough draft before we do the editing and then finally the final paper. we need to make sure that there are transitions and background information that it will go smoothly and for it not to be choppy. the teacher is very picky and wants it to go smoothly and not to be choppy. That is probably the number one thing should we look at. also in English essays, it's very important to have the right grammar and punctuation. The essay must be 5 paragraphs no more no less
- Could you review my essay for higher-order concerns (thesis, organization, and paragraph development) and Grammar, punctuation, Making sure there are transitions and background information so the essay is smooth and NOT choppy