Can y’all help me out with this please?
Gotta be done today before 2:30pm

Hook- Did you know that some of your garbage is killing our oceans, lakes and seas?

Relevant evidence- last year a study estimated around eight million metric tons of our plastic enters the oceans each year

Thesis statement - our oceans are dirty

Transition sentence- Indeed, the water bottle you tossed in the street might end up in your local waterway

it might be feelings and action sorry if i am wrong