John Jeremiah Sullivan's "Feet in Smoke" The "I Saw/I Heard" section is to write notes about the actions you are witnessing in the reading, and can include quotes to show how the author explains or supports the actions.

The "I Thought/I Wondered" section is for personal response to the actions you’re witnessing and the quotes that you are sharing.

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the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

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b. les encantan los juguetes nuevos

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