"I was revising the first draft of my essay and I noticed that one of my paragraphs doesn't support my main point. What should I do?" What should you say to help this student?
First, use some prewriting activities to come up with some new supporting ideas, and then try rewriting that paragraph.
It's too late to do anything about it. After you revise, the next step in the writing process is editing.

Sure, i wish things had turned out differently for me in vietnam. but i know things could have turned out worse, too. so ljust try to be for what i do have and do my best to be independent. i can dress myself and even tie a tie. no more playing guitar, though. if i close my eyes, i can just about hear the music. just strumming my heartstrings is what i'm doing, i suppose. how could the author best resolve this situation to create a feeling of somber regret? a. the narrator describes the difficulty in cooking for himself. b. the narrator decides to sell his guitar and take up a new instrument. c. the narrator points out that he doesn't have to wear a tie too often. d.the narrator mentions a friend who did not live through the war.