How dare the water belittle my thirst, treat me as just
another
small
disturbance,
try to feed me
10 from the bottom of its hand?
Which revision(s) could take place to improve the flow and impa
A.
How dare the water belittle my thirst? How dare it tre
it to try to feed me from the bottom of its hand?!
B.
How dare the water belittle my thirst, treat me as an
C.
How dare the water, belittling my thirst, treat me as
tregon the bottom of its hand!
No revision(s) needed

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i go to the store and buy some cheese,suddenly there was akward silence.   out of no where comes a ninja, and he takes an apple, and chokes the cashier, until he passes out.   the disapeared in a puff of smoke.   the cashier went to the doctor, and everything was fine again.   they all lived happily ever after without anymore ninjas.

the end

go to buy cheese= exposition

akaward silence= rising action

ninja chokes the cashier= climax

cashier goes to the doctor= falling action

they live happily ever after= resolution

kennedy creates personal credibility by saying he is more than fit to lead. he talks about the sixty day period that he constructed administration, and says based on that he will be an acceptable leader.

jfk has a great reputation as an american citizen. he fought in wwii, and earned the navy and marine corps medal. he saved several men on his pt-109 patrol torpedo boat after an attack by the japanese navy. he also served in congress for the 11th congressional district for massachusetts, and served three terms in the house of representatives.

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