2 Lothal was one of the southernmost cities of
A ...the Indus Valley Civilisation. It is
located near Ahmedabad, B Gujarat.
Excavation on the site by the Archaeological
Survey of India started on 13 February
1955. The findings a mound, a
township, a marketplace and the dock. Lothal
D. ha a thriving trade centre in ancient
times, E its trade of beads, gems and
valuable ornaments reaching the far corners
of West Asia and Africa. The tools F
techniques they pioneered for bead-making
e

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