Rewrite and Punctuate the paragraphs below adding appropriate punctuations:
even though it was raining we all went to the park Shamira brought bread
cheese salad and iced tea Alina however brought nothing which made us all
mad Id brought a snack and so had Shan. Alinas excuse was that shed not had
time to go to the shop. However it didnt matter tourists hats were getting blown
off so we knew a storm was coming and left after ten minutes

In the space below, write a five-paragraph, 600-800 word persuasive essay arguing whether or not your chosen speech is effective in communicating its message, based on how it uses rhetorical strategies. include a clear thesis statement identifying whether, in your view, the speaker's argument is effective, based on his or her use of rhetorical strategies. explain why or why not. give your audience a sense of closure by providing a clear conclusion. throughout the essay, be sure to: use formal, objective language for an academic audience, connect your ideas using transitions that clearly tie together your ideas, base your argument on evidence from the text of the speech, and provide a clear conclusion about the speech's effectiveness.