In no fewer than three sentences, critique following paragraph. Explain
Make sure you include a hook, supporting evidence, and
where it could be improved. Then, in your own words, rewrite the paragraph to make its writing stronger.
topic sentence. Use correct spelling and grammar.
Playing in the snow is one my happiest childhood memories.
so many people find the wintertime annoying.
The winter offers more than a
time for kids to have fun.
More people should step outside to enjoy the snow. I am glad
There are many things to do in the snow. It is unfortunate that
grew up where it snows. (5 points)

Write explanatory essay about the effects of earthquakes.

Read the passage from a vindication of the rights of woman. that the society is formed in the wisest manner, whose constitution is founded on the nature of man, strikes, in the abstract, every thinking being so forcibly, that it looks like presumption to endeavour to bring forward proofs; though proof must be brought, or the strong hold of prescription will never be forced by reason; yet to urge prescription as an argument to justify the depriving men (or women) of their natural rights, is one of the absurd sophisms which daily insult common sense. does wollstonecraft maintain an objective tone in the passage? yes, because she uses objective language such as “society is formed in the wisest manner.” yes, because she uses objective language such as “it looks like presumption to endeavor.” no, because she uses subjective language such as “though proof must be brought, or the strong hold.” no, because she uses subjective language such as “absurd sophisms which daily insult common sense.”

My best friend is a white girl named denise — we look at boys together. she sat in front of me all through grade school because of our names: o'connor, ozawa. i know the back of denise's head very well. why does the speaker share details about race, friendship, and names in this stanza? check all the correct answers. to indicate that the students were already segregated and isolated to emphasize the idea that all americans were treated as equals prior to the attack to reveal the extent of the impact resulting from the attack on pearl harbor to identify the compassionate response following the attack on pearl harbor