Two great kings one in France and one in Russia…. BUT who is the best? Could it be Louis XIV or could it be peter the great? Today we will be going through who was a better king and once and for all figure out who was the better king will it be the king of France Louis XIV or will it be the king of Russia peter the great I guess you’ll just have to wait and see… does this sound good and does it need to be fixed to make it more catchy !!! please help this is my introductery paragraph ( pleASE fix)

In at least 150 words, discuss the comparison described in the figurative language and how the connotative language reinforces the symbol. certainly the utmost rim of my first dome was filled with the tumultuous impression of soldiers marching to death for freedom's sake, of pioneers streaming westward to establish self-government in yet another sovereign state. only the great dome of st. peter's itself has ever clutched my heart as did that modest curve which had sequestered from infinitude in a place small enough for my child's mind, the courage and endurance which i could not comprehend so long as it was lost in "the void of unresponsible space" under the vaulting sky itself.