(So my friend asked) Which sentence uses a semicolon correctly?
A. The exercises, as in the other instance, took
place immediately; and in the arena.
B. The criminal could not know out of which
door would come the lady; he opened either he
pleased.
C. If he opened the one, there came out of it a
hungry tiger; the fiercest that could be procured.
(I said if it’s A he said it was C) was I right or was my friend right?

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

ed brushes his teeth

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