Read each Original. The highlighted words are verbs or verb phrases that may be unnecessary in a more highly nominalized version. Complete the Paraphrase to create a more highly nominalized version

of the Original.

1.The fact that the movie bears some resemblance to the epic that has so infl uenced

Western culture actually came about quite by accident, as Joel Coen told interviewers after it was

released

write a letter to the mayor/chairperson of the rular municipality complaining about the massive deforestation in your locality

nervous or scared i would say

hope this ! (if thats not it give me the answer choices)

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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