What is one of the changes
you are looking to make when
you read your draft aloud?

 i dont know if this will help

Explanation:

it seems your test or quiz or whatever it is i would most be happy to you so it seem's here it's talking about justice if i could possible make it up but for you quiz or test i just did some research it would most likely be a. and for a couple of reasons. for the points i really needed them : )