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disown us. Skirts down to our ankles, rolled skirts, when we wanted to rebel, when we were

too lazy to rebel. For never giving up on us, thank you.

I would like to thank all of you. As a school community you have banded together and been

involved in all of the initiatives and carnivals throughout the past year. You have had paint

on your thumbs, had to deal with an onslaught of posters and a school “contagion” of mercy

spirit. You all survived it and I am pleased to say I think you will never be cured.

Finally, to the new leaders of Catherine McAuley and to our two new school captains, Clare

Cox and Elizabeth Eid. I wish you luck in your endeavour to continuously strive to serve the

school and its community. I have all the faith in the world that you will do a fantastic job and

bring your own style and creativity to the role of a mercy leader. In the words of John

Quincy Adams, sixth President of the United States, “If your actions inspire others to dream

more, learn more, do more and become more, you are a leader.”

I want to leave you today with the drive to use your friendships to grow as a young mercy

women and future leaders in the world. And I hope you remember - United in Spirit:

McAuley Let’s Hear It!

Jennifer McCreanor, Year 12

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.