Jack and jill went up the hill the mother said to her children to fetch a pail of water. PLS TELL ME IF IM CORRECT IF NOT PLS CORRECT ME ILL MARK BRAINLIEST

(01.15 lc) develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling. sandra walked across the street.