2 TIME REMARANG
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Read this excerpt from "What I Hope to Leave
Behind."
Why would paraphrasing be an effective way to
communicate this excerpt to an audience?
O You could quickly summarize the main points for an
audience who may not know about Eleanor
Roosevelt.
As I see it we can have no new deal until great groups
of people, particularly the women, are willing to have a
revolution in thought; are willing to look ahead,
completely unconscious of losing the house on Fifth
Avenue as long as somewhere they have a place to live
which they themselves may gradually make into a
home, are willing to give up constant competition for a
little more material welfare and cooperate in everything
which will make all those around them acquire a little
more freedom and graciousness in life.
O You could use the names of contemporary women
to illustrate how Eleanor Roosevelt's words apply
today.
O You could keep much of the original language while
updating some of the older references.
O You could rearrange the sequence of information so
that it would be easier for your audience to
understand.
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i have identified the gerund in this sentence by writing it in all capitals.

gerund phrase: writing it in all capitals

gerund use: object of preposition

the manager emerges. taking marlow aside, he says they have done all they can for kurtz. he adds that kurtz did more harm than good for the company. his actions were too "vigorous" for the moment. the manager says that kurtz was unethically gathering ivory by exploiting the locals. this, of course, is rather ironic coming from a guy who makes his living by exploiting the locals in the worst ways.

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