The lion snarled and opened its mouth to reveal long, sharp teeth. Danny could see a skinny string of meat dangling from one of its front incisors, probably left over from the last time the lion ate. “I wonder what it had for dinner last night,” Danny thought, inching away from the gigantic beast. “I hope it wasn’t anybody I know!” Check the two examples of vivid details.
“to reveal long, sharp teeth”
“the last time the lion ate”
“from the gigantic beast”
Think about your topic. What vivid details can you include? Brainstorm a list.

judy jones is an attractive woman who receives attention from many men throughout the story.   despite her beautiful appearance, she is superficial and callous.   she is an aggressive woman who goes after any man she desires but she is not happy.   she is fickle and is never satisfied.   her beauty is only skin deep.   dexter breaks down because he knows his dreams are unattainable.   he believes that wealth and physical beauty are what will make him happy.   he soon realizes that she has lost her attractive looks.   it is not all what he had planned.

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