Deliverable 05: Collaboration on the Final Draft of a Persuasive Essay: Please answer the following short questions as if you are offering feedback and input--in about 25 word answers--to your work colleague as a form of solid feedback about this paper. Your sentences should be complete and answer the prompt in light of what you are reading before you. I, the reader, feel the topic of this paper is stated quite plainly and a clear position is taken on it because (why or why not?): Name 2 elements of the writing process you think this author needed to consider more thoroughly in stating his/her position. Did you find the research element to be covered sufficiently in this persuasive research essay? Why or Why Not? Consider the sentence structures here. Do they demonstrate the writer’s critical thinking ability in this exercise? Why or Why Not? List 4 unique errors pertaining to the correct use of APA formatting throughout this paper:

be didn't use protection for the flames

explanation:

3 degree burn

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explanation:

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.