WHO CAN REVISE MY ESSAY AND MAKE IT COLLEGE LEVEL WRITING? PLEASE ONLY ANSWER IF YOU CAN HELP. THANK YOU :)

Read the paragraph. we heard music coming from the auditorium so we crept up to the door in peaked in. i couldn’t believe my eyes! a group of dancers were on stage in the most beautiful costumes i have ever seen. i looked at mabel and she looked back at me with the same expression. our eyes were wide with joy and wonder. which point of view does the narrator use

Elect the correct text in the passage.vhich sentence is a simple sentence? time is not always change. time can also mean continuity, and it can mean keeping acknowledged truths in mind despite differences incraumstonces. there is no better example of this in things fall apart than the retellings of the proverb about the bird named eneke, the larin both retellings is olmost identical despite the length of time that has passed between their repetitions. in comparing the usages of the samproverb, achebe allows his readers to note the similarities and differences between the situations, and he them understand how this stbe applied to their own lives.submit

In a short paragraph of 100-150 words, briefly describe the differences between any character in the two versions of macbeth. justify your answer with evidence. i will give brainliest to who gets it right