NOW i'm gonna tell a really confusing story ok!!?? here goes hOpeFuLlY yOu cAn KEeP UP! because i'm expecting a full 500 page essay about this *evil laughter* hehehehehehe nOw!: I was inside taking my plane for a walk when i saw a cow fly by i looked in the sky to see it was actually a horse and i was so surprised i slipped on the sky then i found out it was because my fingers were greasy from eating a hot bowl of ice cream on a monday night in the morning, so after all of that i went to bed so i can wake up and go to sleep in the garage when suddenly my mom's son's mom walked in through the hole in my roof and swept the grass, next thing you know i'm sneezing my nose off...until i actually saw that it was my brain...which is why i have no soul but i wanted a soul so i slurped a bowl of bricks but i still didn't get my soul back so i died and i went with my family to my funeral...which was actually my dad's funeral but be attended his own funeral too...and the moral of this story! don't do drugs :))) i'm pretty generous here's 100 points ;)

Me asap it's an e2020 test and it's timedread the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united statesis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.what revision would most strengthen sentence 1?