The following is a student draft. It may contain errors. Learning Online

(1) While education is something that people have valued throughout time, deciding the best way to promote education has been the subject of much debate. (2) In today's digital age, many students are increasingly choosing online learning to further their studies. (3) Technology has transformed education for students by opening doors that were once unavailable to them.
(4) One issue that many students face is the lack of a more personalized education that fits their individual needs and interests. (5) Some people think being on a computer or a tablet during school hours would be distracting, but students can take more control of their learning by pacing themselves and taking online elective classes that tailor to their unique interests. (6) This makes them more involved and willing to work in class. (7) Oftentimes, students have so much going on during the day that certain classes become second priority. (8) Online classes allow the flexibility to enroll in evening or early morning classes that are not offered during the school day. (9) This prevents conflicts in schedules.
(10) The problem is that in large traditional classes, students do not receive as much attention and feedback as they would in smaller virtual classes. (11) Having online education available would help schools create smaller classes. (12) During the time some students attend virtual classes, other students could attend face-to-face classes, resulting in smaller classes and more time for teachers to customize their instruction.
(13) School administrators argue that virtual learning is a great idea in theory but is hard to implement because there are not enough funds to pay for the technology students need to take online classes. (14) However, suggesting that technology is too expensive is simply not true. (15) By spending funds on technology in the classroom rather than on labor, schools could increase the number of online classes and afford to pay for better teacher training to improve teacher quality and effectiveness. (16) More online classes would allow students to have access to more talented teachers from all over the world, no matter where they live. (17) This means that Bingwen would not be able to continue learning English to become proficient enough to attend a college in the United States. (18) For example, Bingwen, a student living in China, went to a school that did not have English teachers who were skilled enough to teach higher level English language classes. (19) He was bummed until he found out he could take in an English class online with an amazing teacher who taught in another country.
(20) People are quickly discovering how beneficial online learning can be. (21) Some experts estimate that half of high school classes will be taught online within the next decade. (22) This comes as no surprise since online learning has the potential to help students in many ways.

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Select the correct answer.
Jordan will be presenting this argument to the school board. How should he revise sentence 19 to have a more formal tone?
A.
He was upset beyond belief that no teacher was available until he found out he could take an English class online with an awesome teacher who taught in another country.
B.
He was super disappointed he could not take an English class until he found out he could enroll in an online class with a cool teacher who taught in another country.
C.
He thought the shortage of teachers would hinder his education until he found out he could enroll online in an English class with a high-quality teacher who taught in another country.
D.
He thought he wasted all his efforts in learning English until he found out he could sign up for an English class online with a really, really great teacher who taught in another country.