Can someone fix this poem to make it better? (This is for my sister lol)

The year is coming to an end, I can’t believe it’s true.
Before we know it, We’ll be moving onto somewhere new.

It seems like only yesterday we entered 5th grade
Think of all the fun we’ve had, and all the progress we’ve made

We studied things like math, reading, and writing
We also learned to do our best and to solve disagreements without arguing.

We played at recess on the monkey bars and slides
We hoped we wouldn’t misbehave and have to sit out on the side.

We’ve grown as learners and as friends but now it’s time to go.
Thanks!

If you were writing a descriptive paragraph about your favorite food and used compound adjectives, what piece ofpunctuation could be effective for describing the food? semicolonhyphencolondash

Read the passage. tomorrow, senator connie sullivan will meet with us farmers to discuss a new trade deal. she will also discuss the state of iowa’s economy and the crucial need to modernize nafta. according to the us chamber of commerce, approximately 14 million jobs depend on trade with mexico. at a delegate meeting last wednesday, sullivan said, "this is a number much too large to ignore.” which sentence corrects the error in capitalization? tomorrow, senator connie sullivan will meet with us farmers to discuss a new trade deal. she will also discuss the state of iowa’s economy and the crucial need to modernize nafta. according to the us chamber of commerce, approximately 14 million jobs depend on trade with mexico. at a delegate meeting last wednesday, sullivan said, “this is a number much too large to ignore.”

What is the best way to improve the conclusion? add a sentence to the ending that summarizes the writer’s topic. add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writer’s experiences. revise the final sentence to have a different tone. revise the first sentence to state a future goal.