Which of the following sentences would be most appropriate to include in a personal statement June wrote as part of an application to a very competitive college? A. I like reading. Pride and Prejudice is my favorite book.
B. I like reading. Pride and Prejudice is my favorite book.
C. Pride and Prejudice is one my favorite works of classic literature.
D. Pride and Prejudice is an important book. It was written long ago.

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.