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English, 30.04.2021 14:00 dorkygirl

How is the following sentence improved by the revision? Original sentence: Hester was judged by the community for her sin.

Revision: The community judged Hester for her sin.

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1.improves connotation

2. deletes repetitive words

3. uses more descriptive language

4. removes passive voice and correctly places modifier

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