How is the following sentence improved by the revision?
Original sentence: Hester was judged by the community for her sin.
Revision: The community judged Hester for her sin.
Multiple choice
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1.improves connotation
2. deletes repetitive words
3. uses more descriptive language
4. removes passive voice and correctly places modifier
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