Reread the following paragraph from p. 212: "You know how this story turns out. Taro lives the life of a prince, but what does
he end up wanting more than anything?" To go home, Manjiro thought. To go home to
see his old parents. Taro wanted this so badly that he left the beautiful princes and the
glittering kingdom for it. Manjiro did not need to go to the undersea kingdom to know
that was what he wanted, too - more than anything else.' What theme is developed in
this paragraph? Why?

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

yes you could be a life guard if that the question.

bc

explanation:

because it crosses through the circle twice