HELLO!! Reformulate please
I applied to your school because it has a very good reputation, and its humanistic spirit is rare, but also because at the moment I don't have any accommodation where I can sleep because I have just arrived in Australia and my economic situation is not improving, I can't rent a flat or a house so I would like a room without paying

I am a fairly dynamic, organised person who likes teamwork because I think that teamwork can be constructive, so nothing is forgotten