Anyone who is good at English 2 please help i've been struggling a'lot with this subject so any help would be greatly appreciated! i assume it wants an example and then a explanation of a thesis but i'm not sure "write an explanation of what you found as you evaluated the information and thesis. How/why did you consider the need for changes? Then write your revised thesis."

chapter i -- paris: september, 1792

a surging, seething, murmuring crowd of beings that are human only in name, for to the eye and ear they seem naught but savage creatures, animated by vile passions and by the lust of vengeance and of hate.

during the greater part of the day the guillotine had been kept busy at its ghastly work: all that france had boasted of in the past centuries, of ancient names, and blue blood, had paid toll to her desire for liberty and for fraternity.

hope this answer you: )!

i think it is who. im not sure to be honest

b. and i with my fighting heart, i thought at

first / to steal up to him [the cyclops].   the cyclops’ actions first odysseus to take

action after killing his men and trapping in the cave revealed his intent of

doing them harm.   that is why odysseus

blinded him to enable him and his men to escape.