Tejas decided to rewrite the sentence

the crowd yelled, and they jumped up when the buzzer went off.
as
when the buzzer sounded, the cheering fans leaped to their feet in excitement.

was tejas correct in making the revision?

a) no, because the new sentence is much too long.
b) yes, because the new sentence adds vivid language.
c) yes, because the new sentence is longer than the first.
d) no, because the new sentence is not as clear as the first.

Select the rebuttal statement that best refutes the viewpoint in section one. a) it is necessary to oversee the athletes involved in mixed martial arts. b) it is unnecessary to oversee the athletes involved in mixed martial arts. c) it is necessary for athletes involved in mixed martial arts to self-regulate. d) one distinctive feature of mixed martial arts is the combination of various techniques.

If one writes logically, he will prove his point. is this sentence correct or contains an unwarranted shift in person?

My best friend is a white girl named denise — we look at boys together. she sat in front of me all through grade school because of our names: o'connor, ozawa. i know the back of denise's head very well. why does the speaker share details about race, friendship, and names in this stanza? check all the correct answers. to indicate that the students were already segregated and isolated to emphasize the idea that all americans were treated as equals prior to the attack to reveal the extent of the impact resulting from the attack on pearl harbor to identify the compassionate response following the attack on pearl harbor