Which sentence should be revised to reduce wordiness?
a. people live with a general expectation of privacy, not considering how thoroughly their daily actions are monitored and recorded by various devices.
b. some monitoring, such as video surveillance in many businesses, including banks and retail stores, is to be expected as necessary in order to provide security for the businesses.
c. people don't often consider how thoroughly their activities are monitored and recorded.
d. people live with a general expectation of privacy, but in reality their daily actions are being monitored and recorded by various devices.

the excerpt from chapter 2 of "animal farm", by george orwell that is an example of foreshadowing is "these three (snowball, napoleon, and squealer) had elaborated old major's teachings into a complete system of thought to which they gave the name of animalism." animal farm is an allegory of how czarist russia developed into communist russia with all its corruption. old major's teachings represent marx's theories turned into communism, animalism, by the three pigs. this foreshadows the oppression and corruption that will follow this revolt.

second person

explanation:

note the heavy uses of "you", "your", as well as "he".

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