Think of a novel or short story that you appreciated. write an example of a poor thesis statement for that text and explain why it is a poor example

Dagon

Explanation:

A poor thesis statement about H. P. Lovecraft's Dagon would be:

Dagon is about the fear of being lost

This is a poor statement because, even though the main character of the story is actually lost and is not sure how he ended up in that weird place, the story is about so much more than that and it involves the unknown, the incomprehensible, and intelligent beings that only reveal the insignificance of the human race. Dagon makes you feel lost, but not as if you didn't know where you where, but more like as if nothing around you makes sense. You're not lost in a place on Earth, you're lost in the whole Universe. It's not a special fear, but an internal fear of not knowing what matters when you realize your place in the infinite universe: a place of insignificance.

- "chilles is sad and angry because hector, the trojan leader, killed his best friend patroclus. he seems angry with himself because he didn't or protect patroclus against the trojans."

the addition that would strengthen melissa’s thesis statement, both the dark game and the code book explain the importance of codebreaking, is :

main ideas of each book

melissa should discuss the main ideas of each book because these ideas will fully support her thesis statement. through these details, readers will also understand the importance of codebreaking that melissa referred to, which was inspired by the books.

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