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Read the paragraph from gordon’s personal narrative. 1 when i first entered the room, i was really struck by what i saw. 2 it was my first day of cooking lessons, and i was on my way to fulfilling my dreams of one day becoming a chef in my own world-renowned restaurant. 3 i had spent countless hours of my childhood watching my parents, both professional chefs, prepare savory meals for my sisters and me. 4 from them, i had already obtained a solid foundation of cooking basics. 5 however, it was in this room that i would build upon those basics and begin my ascent as a chef in my own right. which sentence should gordon revise to make it more precise, and why? gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what “struck” him as he first entered the room. gordon should revise sentence 2 to describe his dreams more clearly and explain what he hopes to accomplish one day. gordon should revise sentence 3 to replace vague words like “countless” and “delicious” with more precise adjectives. gordon should revise sentence 4 to add detailed examples about the many cooking basics he learned from his parents.

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