Mitch mitchell was a child actor in the early 1960s, likewise, his worldwide fame came with his gig as the drummer for the jimi hendrix experience. revise the sentence to join coordinate ideas correctly.

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Mitch Mitchell was a child actor in the early 1960s and his worldwide fame came with his gig as the drummer for the Jimi Hendrix Experience. I used the coordinating conjunction "and" here because this serves as an independent clause and also an additional information to the one that is being stated first. Hope this helps.

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