Iwas born in 1992 in chicago. i moved to new york city when i was 12. i published my first story in my school’s literary journal when i was a freshman. i am now the editor of the school newspaper. i want to study journalism when i am in college.

what would be the most effective way to revise this paragraph?

a. avoid beginning each sentence with the pronoun
b. work with a group of peer reviewers
c. change the verb tenses
d. include a summary sentence at the end of the paragraph

Buckminster boy. she glared at him. "lizzie, i swear to you, as sure as i'm standing right here—that's a lie. every bit of it. every single bit." "my granddaddy said it was a lie, too." she leaned her head to one side and looked at him steadily. "so why haven't you been down to the island? " "so only you get to ask questions now? " "yes." she waited. "i haven't been down to the island because my father believes that you were using me to you stay on malaga island." "well," she said slowly. "well." "i didn't believe it, either." the sea breeze lay at their feet panting, hoping they would play with it again. based on what turner and lizzie say, which is the best conclusion that can be drawn? they are angered by the lies the adults have been spreading. neither of them is able to fully trust what the other is claiming. each trusts the other and cares a great deal about their friendship. both are worried about the troubles their friendship may bring.

Describe the cluster of trailers from the loch ness monster by john mcphee

Give an example of one of the choices from the question above. explain what makes your example fit into this classification. use complete sentences, proper grammar, spelling and capitalization.