Hi,
you can tell me if what i write is, if there are no mistakes? you.
dear mrs murray,
i am writing to apply for a job as a dog walker.
i am 14 years old and i am a student at stevens school. i love animals. i have three cats, two dogs and a rabbit.
i'm free all weekend and i live in manchester.
later, i would like to study to become a veterinary, that's my ambition.
last summer i worked for four weeks at the shop "toutounet."
and four other week at the spa, i enjoyed.
every night, i'll walk the dog of my neighbor because she is elderly.
i am a nice person and i love meeting people.
my phone number is (020) 85541254 and my mobile number is 077765015841.
yours sincerely,

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report