Which strategy is the best way to improve the written expression in a redundant sentence?

a.) add additional modifiers and phrases.

b.) eliminate powerful words.

c.) include words that state the obvious.

d.) remove unnecessary repetition.

The correct answer is D. Remove unnecessary repetition.

Redundancy is termed as needless repetition of phrases, ideas, paragraphs, sentences, and words.

For example, instead of saying circle you say circle around, A total of twenty cows instead of twenty cows, revert back instead of  revert, summarise briefly instead of summarise.

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