The following is a rough draft of a student's story, which may contain errors.
a winter night
(1) it's freezing out here, rebecca said to her brother. (2) she was jumping up and down trying to stay warm despite the cold night breeze. (3) she and the rest of her family were standing in front of a one-story, red-brick house that was just down the street from their house.
(4) rebecca's father rang the doorbell. (5) a light turned on in the foyer. (6) "all right, everyone," he said in a hushed voice. (7) get ready to sing when the door opens.
(8) rebecca cleared her throat. (9) as soon as the door cracked, the family started singing jingle bells at the top of their lungs.
(10) the neighbor stood in the doorway with an amused look on her face. (11) it was the first time she had carolers come to her house. (12) she just relaxed and enjoyed the song.
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which is the correct way to punctuate sentence 9?
a.
"as soon as the door cracked, the family started singing jingle bells at the top of their lungs."
b.
as soon as the door cracked, the family started singing "jingle bells" at the top of their lungs.
c.
"as soon as the door cracked," the family started singing jingle bells at the top of their lungs.
d.
as soon as the door cracked, "the family started singing jingle bells at the top of their lungs."

i don't see anything attached can you attach something?

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

the best sentence that shows the best placement for the modifier "on the ice" is the one which contains it in the end of the sentence or in its beggining followed by a comma, that indicates it works as adverbial, dislocated in the sentence.

the girl promptly slid on her rollers on the ice.

on the ice, the girl promptly slid on her rollers.