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English, 30.01.2020 00:53 ilianysacosta10
You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article. then you will write a reflection on the changes you have made. you will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and the reflection paragraph.
view the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. this is your guide to a super submission.
review your informational article. choose one body paragraph to revise. copy this paragraph into a new document.
combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. revise those sentences.
write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
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to continue, video games could not only be used for entertainment but also education. for example, schools would use games to get kids used to how to use a computer they would also use video games to teach subjects like language, math, reading, science, and other subjects. even the u. s military used video games for educational purposes like combat training. overall video games a lot on educational systems.
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