Plesae in english i will give brainlist answer and
compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:
original: my father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
revised: my father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.
what was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? (10 points)

a longer phrase was converted to a single word.

a modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

redundant phrases were eliminated.

repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

The lovely voices in ardor appealing over the water made me crave to listen, and i tried to say 'untie me! ' to the crew, jercing my brows; but they bent steady to the oars. then perimedes got to his feet, he and eurylochus, and passed more line about, to hold me still. –the odyssey, homer which quotation is correctly formatted using ml.a citation? a. “i tried to say / 'untie me! ' to the crew, jercing my brows.” (homer 80) b. homer writes, “i tried to say / 'untie me! ' to the crew, jercing my brows” (80). c. “i tried to say / 'untie me! ' to the crew, jercing my brows” (homer 77-78). d. homer writes, “i tried to say / 'untie me! ' to the crew, jercing my brows (77-78).”