Her eyes are heavy,
she's tired of trying,
dreaming of a life which will never be hers,
because she doesn't believe she deserves,
the love which you've offered,
or the smile on your face,
to her you're precious,
for her corrupt distaste

This sounds so beautiful!! Try making more poems!

Explanation:

dickinson punctuation and lines in her poems to establish a rhythm. each reader will naturally find themselves reading the poem in the same way. she uses the repeating question marks and exclamation points to convey the passion in her words. shelley uses punctuation to paint a picture in the reader's mind. for example, the ellipses after "stand in the dessert" evoke a silence, as it would feel in a deserted, old place.

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