Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

"how long should we wait for our friends? " wondered meg.
"the theater opens in twenty minutes," sally replied, "and the movie starts in thirty. we can save them seats."

Which statement best describes the intended aesthetic impact of this excerpt?

1. while some people only consider the cute little bundle of fur, there are many daily rituals of pet ownership. 2. one of the biggest surprises of adopting a puppy is how much exercise it needs on a daily basis. 3. the cost of food, the veterinarian and general supplies is another surprise to many new dog owners. 4. adopting a puppy is a hefty responsibility. read the four sentences and determine which answer shows the most logical order. a) 1, 4, 3, 2 b) 2, 3, 1, 4 c) 3, 2, 4, 1 d) 4, 1, 2, 3

Which word best describes the tone of "will we ever grow organs? "