I've always dreamed of designing formula one race cars for a living. as a kid, i'd spend hours watching the races, drawing the cars, and building elaborate models. i was a pretty good soccer player, but not as good as my older brother. during high school, i worked very hard studying physics and learning about aerodynamics. i spent summers visiting races and talking to the drivers about what was important to them in a race car.
a peer review should find that this paragraph
a. contains spelling errors.
b. needs a topic sentence.
c. is not logically ordered.
d. contains extraneous information.

c? not a 100% sure

explanation:

explanation:

if you’re a fan of chocolate, every occasion is right for this treat. feeling down? eat some chocolate. celebrating? eat some more. want to show your valentine how special you think your sweetheart is? offer up chocolate!   people have been enjoying chocolate as a food, drink and medicine for thousands of years. the ancient maya and aztecs called chocolate kakaw and used it as medicine. they also made chocolate offerings to their gods. chocolate comes from the cacao (kuh-kow) tree, and its scientific name reflects its history. theobroma cacao translates to “cacao, food of the gods.” these days, chocolate is not just for deities. the treat has become popular around the world.

i’m not sure but i believe it is true