I'm writing a sentence that's supposed to show how fast technology had advanced, as well as to partially exaggerate it, and i can't seem to correctly "word" this. can you me out?

sentence:
however, recently, technology has been advancing pretty quickly, advancing from windows 1.0, where you had to navigate using arrow keys, to interactive virtual reality, where you could literally pick up and interact with nonexistent objects.

any would be appreciated, even if you say my sentence makes complete sense and i just wasted 10 points on this.

Isaw my future flash before me and it did not take me anytime to slow down. i need to replace the words "it did".

Read the excerpt from "a defence of poetry.” poetry thus makes immortal all that is best and most beautiful in the world; it arrests the vanishing apparitions which haunt the interlunations of life, and veiling them, or in language or in form, sends them forth among mankind, bearing sweet news of kindred joy to those with whom their sisters abide—abide, because there is no portal of expression from the caverns of the spirit which they inhabit into the universe of things. poetry redeems from decay the visitations of the divinity in man. which details from the excerpt provide more information about shelley’s idea that poetry "makes immortal all that is best and most beautiful in the world”? check all that apply. arrests the vanishing apparitions which haunt the interlunations of life sends them forth among mankind, bearing sweet news to those with whom their sisters abide no portal of expression from the caverns of the spirit redeems from decay the visitations of the divinity in man

What is the best summary of this monologue