Read the excerpt from jackson’s letter to his principal about starting a new club at his school.

(1) i have talked to twelve of my fellow students who are also interested in forming a photography club. (2) also, ms. gonzales told me that she might want to out.

which is the best revision of sentence 2?
also, ms. gonzales told some people that she wants to be part of the club.
also, ms. gonzales let me know that she thinks this is a good idea.
in addition, ms. gonzales said that she likes taking pictures too.
in addition, ms. gonzales has expressed interest in being our advisor

In addition, Ms. Gonzales has expressed interest in being our advisor

Explanation:

The first time he wrote this, the formal tone of the paragraph gets lost when he says "Also", in addition is a good way of continuing with the formal tone that a petition to a principal must have, and the fact that Ms. Gonzales has stated that she wants to help out is better expressed, by saying that she has expressed interest, when doing formal petitions like this we must keep in mind that there are forms and ways to ask for things, and a formal petition is the bet way to go when you want to create something new in your school, city, sport club or other institutions.