Iwandered lonely as a cloud metaphor

Write a review of the first part of american born chinese that explains your opinion on the effectiveness of two different plot elements

Plz i'm really bad with these and it would really mean a lot if you could ?

In the following sentences, commas are needed after which words? when the clark family planned their summer vacation to hell’s canyon they didn’t plan on having quite so many adventures. from the start they had to deal with a broken-down van a sick baby and torrential rains.