I'm doing essay about sumthin like this who thinks its good
everyone goes through some things but people bullys i should say push people and when these people are already down and it sends them to wanting to kill themselves or depression and all kinds of things. people everyone should be nice and say nice things to people. like everyone out there bullys non bullys are special and nice an all beautiful. so every one be happy becuase don't listen to bullys they are just rude people listen to good people who think your cute or nice or sweet and we need to stop bullying it is not no one.
how this sound for a stop bullying essay

i wouldnt say people comit suid suide because of buillying but other than that its great good start

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .