Can someone take a look at my thesis and give me some tips on how i can structure it better? don't rewrite it for me just give some tips i would prefer for this to be through message since i did write this thesis myself and i wouldn't want anyone to take it and then cause me to get marked for

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for this, you need to remember something significant in your own life, for example, if you were bullied when you were younger, you can mention your memories on this and touch on how such treatment can harm other kids your age either physically or mentally. (racism, car crashes, a parent in the hospital are all very good subjects, think hard on it! )

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