Could someone do a grammar check on this rough draft so far? and if i made any grammar mistakes tell me the problems and how i can fix them.

there are many things for families to do in ohio! people can go to cedar point, go to the rock and roll hall of fame, and sporting events such as the cleveland cavs and the cleveland indians! let’s learn about the rock and roll hall of fame. “the rock and roll hall of fame was made by i. m pei in 1986”. what the rock and roll hall of fame it was a museum of famous people who have sang, and made music throughout the years. the famous people in the museum have unfortunately died. some people who are in the rock and roll hall of fame are: ahmet ertegun who died in 1987, al green who died in 1995, alan freed who died in 1986, the animals who died in 1994, and b. b king who died in 1987.

now let’s talk about cedar point! cedar point was made by george boeckling in 1897. cedar point is a roller coaster park that has a lot of rides, it has tons of food, and there is a water park too! the current roller coasters they have right now are: millennium force, maverick, the mantis, and my three favorite roller coasters are, the iron dragon, corkscrew, and the mine ride. they have lots of games and you can win prizes from them! it would be a fun place for your family to go to.

       I went through and fixed what I thought might need a little changing, I didn't see much wrong at all though, good job! ^w^

       There are many things for families to do in Ohio! People can go to Cedar Point, the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame, and sporting events such as the Cleveland Cavs and The Cleveland Indians! Let’s learn about the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame. “The Rock and Roll Hall of Fame was made by I.M Pei in 1986”. The Rock and Roll Hall of Fame is a museum of famous people who have sang, and made music throughout the years. The famous people in the museum have unfortunately passed. Some people who are in the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame are: Ahmet Ertegun who died in 1987, Al Green who died in 1995, Alan Freed who died in 1986, The Animals who died in 1994, And B.B King who died in 1987.

        Now let’s talk about Cedar Point! Cedar Point was made by George Boeckling in 1897. Cedar Point is a roller coaster park that has a lot of rides, it has Tons of Food, and there is a Water Park too! The current roller coasters they have right now are: Millennium Force, Maverick, The Mantis, and my three favorite roller coasters are, The Iron Dragon, Corkscrew, and the Mine Ride. They have lots of games and you can win prizes from them! It would be a fun place for your family to go to!

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explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)