Any revising and editing needed in this poem? Giving brainliest to honest personnel For My Gorgeous Waterfall
by falling
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Your palace is gorgeous,
And so are you.

Orchids are white,
Ghost ones are rare,
Grandeur is majestic,
And so is your hair.

Magnolia grows,
With buds like eggs,
Your functioning is smooth,
And so are your legs.

Sunflowers reach,
Up to the skies,
Tea is green,
And so are your eyes.

Foxgloves in hedges,
Surround the farms,
The place is beautiful,
And so are your arms.

Daisies are pretty,
Daffies have style,
A welcome is warm,
And so is your smile.

A waterfall is beautiful,
Just like you.

Which line in this excerpt from the great gatsby by f. scott fitzgerald contains a simile? about half way between west egg and new york the motor-road hastily joins the railroad and runs beside it for a quarter of a mile, so as to shrink away from a certain desolate area of land. this is a valley of ashes—a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air. occasionally a line of grey cars crawls along an invisible track, gives out a ghastly creak and comes to rest, and immediately the ash-grey men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud which screens their obscure operations from your sight.