Draft: I'm sorry, but the game system I bought last week was a rip-off. It's
really not fair of GameBoxUltra to treat paying customers so badly. I
was really looking forward to using my game system and now I can't. It
really stinks. I am going to tell my friends that the GameBoxUltra 2950
is a piece of junk.
How well does this draft address the audience and purpose of the following
prompt?
Writing prompt.
You recently purchased a new video game console, but now, two
weeks later, one of the controllers has stopped working. Write a letter
to the company asking for a replacement part.

a complex sentence consists of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses.  

to write complex sentences, we must use subordinating conjunctions.  

all the complex sentences begin with a subordinating conjunction and when it occurs, a comma must be place at the end of the dependent clause. on the contrary, if the sentence begins with an independent clause, then no comma is used.

after  

although  

as  

because  

before  

if  

since  

when  

for example,  

after she won the competition, she became very popular.  

although my father was hurt, he continued fighting for his rights.  

as all of you got a ten, you will be able to leave early today.  

before he went to the war, he asked his parents to bless him.  

if it is cold, i won’t go out.  

since you didn’t bring the homework, you will get low grades.  

when it is hot in the town, everyone goes to the beach.  

in the following paragraph, the fourth sentence the correct answer is: three personal subject pronouns

”she was embarrassed when she found that they had been put back on the shelves…”

a   subject pronoun is a personal pronoun. i, you, he, she it, we, they.  

in the sentence it can be observed she, used twice and they used once. is for this reason that is a three personal subject pronoun sentence.

i think you might be able to change the langauge either on the website for you to see or your computer.