How can I make my narrative story more interesting and a bit suspenseful that would keep the reader reading? The narrative needs to be creative, imaginative and brings the story to life. The topic is about fear and I'm writing my personal experience of my fear of spiders. So my question is, what are some ways I can make my narrative more creative and a bit suspenseful that would keep reader reading? My story is kind of boring and I would like to make it more creative.

The rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago.which choice combines these two sentences from paragraph two to achieve a coherent flow of ideas? a) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden" and permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. b) permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago and the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." c) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden; " and so the permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. d) because of the rich natural resources which made the sacramento valley a ‘garden of eden,’ native americans established permanent villages there 8,000 years ago.

Apply the ideas of the plain language movement to make the paragraph under "before" in section i more user-friendly.

Ayudenme a ordenar esta oracion interrogativa en ingles sandro and bertha / study english / at school.