One of your classmates has asked you to help her revise a speech that she will be giving about the importance of family. Revise her speech in the following ways:
1. Make the speech formal.
2. Add instructions to indicate where the visual images should be shown to the audience, choosing images from the ones below. (For example, [Show image of fireworks].) Be sure to select at least two of the images, and make sure that they're relevant and helpful.
3. Make the details more specific to help strengthen the speech. You may add supporting details as needed, even if you make them up.
NOTE: Underline any lines you copy from her original speech.
Speech:
Some people may think that a family is just a boring group of people they are related to. Family is an important group of people, in my opinion. One reason I love my family is they've got my back when times get tough. One time I fell off my bike when I was a little kid and I broke my leg. I was hurting real bad and had to be in the hospital for a long time. Over a month long. My dad, mom, and kid sister came to see me every day. They brought me stuff to keep my busy: books, games, magazines, we watched TV. My family supported me. Families are great!
I'll mark brainliest, and 50 points
Answers: 2
English, 21.06.2019 13:30
This is always in the form of "to" + a verb-like word. this verbal unit in a sentence actually acts as a noun, adjective, or adverb, rather than a verb. example: ("to carry," "to think," "to laugh")
Answers: 2
English, 22.06.2019 05:30
Drag each excerpt to its poetic structure. what poetic structures are evident in these poetry excerpts blank verse ballad stanza something there is that doesnt love a wall
Answers: 1
English, 22.06.2019 07:00
Thesis - the cost of a death sentence far outweighs the costs associated with sentencing a convicted criminal to life in prison. which evidence best supports the thesis above xo a. the advent of the death penalty can be traced back to hammurabi's famous set of laws. โo b. the state of texas spent almost $1.2 million on the execution of leonard hughes. o c. seventeen states, including washington, currently have criminals awaiting execution o d. many people believe that the death penalty should be abolished for various reasons,
Answers: 3
English, 22.06.2019 07:30
Select all the correct answers. which sentences contain a noun clause? rhett was unwilling to listen to what his friend told him. jade won the frisbee competition that was held in the city park. whoever said that the early bird catches the worm was right. the cowboy threw his lasso at the bull, which quickly threw it off and raced away.
Answers: 3
One of your classmates has asked you to help her revise a speech that she will be giving about the i...
Mathematics, 27.09.2019 16:30
Biology, 27.09.2019 16:30
Mathematics, 27.09.2019 16:30
Physics, 27.09.2019 16:30
Computers and Technology, 27.09.2019 16:30
Spanish, 27.09.2019 16:30
Mathematics, 27.09.2019 16:30
Social Studies, 27.09.2019 16:30
History, 27.09.2019 16:30
Computers and Technology, 27.09.2019 16:30
English, 27.09.2019 16:30
Geography, 27.09.2019 16:30